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Post by sunny on Feb 23, 2009 23:05:21 GMT -5
great poems by everyone!!  dana, lisa. sunny and icee, these are great!!  I love this form too, don;t see it often enough, let me give it a try: clouds
cover
blue slyline
sunlight peers
through Thank you! |
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Post by sunny on Feb 23, 2009 23:09:48 GMT -5
dear Joan, thank you very much for teaching me! how is this one? dawn white fog floating lights calling of mind dream let me know if it still not correct ok? I will change it to correct! thank you very much again Joan! hugs! hi sunny, you are welcome  and yes you now have the correct form great poem  Thank you Joan!  you are very kind!  |
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Post by Lola on Feb 25, 2009 8:25:02 GMT -5
I really like these, Lisa, maybe we sould have a lanturne contest...
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Post by Cyndi on Feb 25, 2009 8:50:31 GMT -5
wind
blown trees
heavy rains
a thunderstorm
brews |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 25, 2009 15:31:02 GMT -5
I really like these, Lisa, maybe we sould have a lanturne contest... hey Lola, maybe this will be the contest for March, thanks for the idea |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 25, 2009 15:31:43 GMT -5
wind
blown trees
heavy rains
a thunderstorm
brews very good job, Cyndi |
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Post by immusie on Feb 25, 2009 23:00:51 GMT -5
Winter
Chilly, Frosty
Huddling, Snuggling, Hiding
Icicles, fires, Icecream, Boardwalks
Strolling, Swimming, Strutting
Lazy, lounging
Summer |
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Post by sunny on Feb 26, 2009 0:30:06 GMT -5
Winter
Chilly, Frosty
Huddling, Snuggling, Hiding
Icicles, fires, Icecream, Boardwalks
Strolling, Swimming, Strutting
Lazy, lounging
Summer this is very creatived! very refreshing! good! |
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Post by b4sunset on Feb 26, 2009 2:15:11 GMT -5
Breathless..sunny pal! musie dear-- ahooo! lovely write, cyn! foamy air
florescent night
shifting blue green shadows
on city full of floating hair.outside, a display
of orange stars embrace lamposts
much awake they cannot hide
from this sudden splendor
stricken by mad desire
to stay, stray
outside |
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Post by Joan on Feb 26, 2009 4:25:25 GMT -5
hey Lisa, a lanturne contest would be a good idea!
immusie and b4 I like your poems but they are not lanturne's, a lanturne has a 1,2,3,4,1 syallable count...
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Post by Brian on Feb 26, 2009 4:49:54 GMT -5
here's one of mine: soft
petals
fall against
her bronze silken
skin |
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Post by Brian on Feb 26, 2009 4:53:38 GMT -5
immusie, I think you have written a diamante
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 26, 2009 14:05:27 GMT -5
good one Brian! here is another one from me: dreams
whisper
listen as
they quietly
speak [/size][/color][/center] |
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Post by Sierra on Feb 26, 2009 14:36:55 GMT -5
great lanturne's Brian and Lisa!!
b4 and immusie I like your poems too, but are they lanturne's ?
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Post by immusie on Feb 26, 2009 17:27:09 GMT -5
Brian you are right....LOL  Sorry guy's....I'll be back..and that's a warning..... |
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and yes you now have the correct form 
Sorry guy's....I'll be back..and that's a warning.....
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
