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Post by sunny on Feb 27, 2009 7:12:00 GMT -5
nice poems mark, joan Cyndi, sunny and b4!! Thank you very much! |
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Post by b4sunset on Feb 27, 2009 7:34:02 GMT -5
Thanks everyone!
bullet trains and light
crackling noises, now
still. lazy, lazy friday
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Post by sunny on Feb 27, 2009 18:13:05 GMT -5
Thanks everyone! bullet trains and light
crackling noises, now
still. lazy, lazy fridayb4 Pal, you are so funnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnyyyy!~! your poem is full of personality and fun! lov it! now you make me want to write one too! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... I love you say lazy, lazy friday! I am in a tire tire friday and my brain all go back to China! and my empty body here is fall asleep! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa let me write one about this... |
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Post by sunny on Feb 27, 2009 18:27:26 GMT -5
Spring of my thoughts
tenderly float
to the soft soil
of yours
sprouts
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Post by b4sunset on Mar 2, 2009 10:28:38 GMT -5
Oooh, you are good, sunny pal! now you ae back to your fine form! ALRIGHT!
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Post by sunny on Mar 2, 2009 21:31:07 GMT -5
Oooh, you are good, sunny pal! now you ae back to your fine form! ALRIGHT! Thanks b4 PaL! how about yours? do you write any new one today? |
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Post by b4sunset on Mar 3, 2009 11:56:00 GMT -5
Okay , here's one sunny pal and all:
cold morning brushes
my hands on flowers cushioned
by promises of dawn
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Post by immusie on Mar 3, 2009 17:26:40 GMT -5
These are great you guy's.....
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Post by sunny on Mar 3, 2009 21:45:09 GMT -5
Okay , here's one sunny pal and all: cold morning brushes
my hands on flowers cushioned
by promises of dawnhey b4 Pal! I really like your poem a lot!  I go find a pillow image... put it in for fun ok!  see what it looks like ok? just for fun ok? b4, let's just have fun!  cold morning brushes
my hands on flowers cushioned
by promises of dawn[/color][/size] what do you think B4 Pal?  not bad uh?? kind of just like your words... uh? what do you think? if you don't like it, just take it off ok.. I feel it its very match and fun! again I like your poem a lot! it creates a very warm morning feeling out of your word of 'cold', and specially the cushions... it makes me want to sleep longer and don't want to get up! |
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Post by b4sunset on Mar 4, 2009 5:16:02 GMT -5
Woohoo, love the visual and all, my sweet sunny pal! i want it the way you posted this.. makws me feel so special.. now i like to sleep with that huggy pillow and your roses! thanks, thanks!  |
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Post by sunny on Mar 4, 2009 7:42:43 GMT -5
Woohoo, love the visual and all, my sweet sunny pal! i want it the way you posted this.. makws me feel so special.. now i like to sleep with that huggy pillow and your roses! thanks, thanks! hey b4 pal! so you like it? wowowo! great! too bad that I don't have art program in my computer... else I would have put some roses on to the bed and by the pillow!!! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that would be much fun right! but now it will do! haaa I too like huggy pillow too... heeee.. but I don't have pillows to hug... so I hug my winter coat instead! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa thanks b4 for let me have fun! what is your next ? haaaaa... |
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Post by b4sunset on Mar 13, 2009 23:01:32 GMT -5
hmm, what's next? ok, sunny pal and all.. city lights smiling yellow sprinkling bulbs on talking flowers wondering if it's traffic |
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Post by sunny on Mar 14, 2009 6:37:40 GMT -5
hmm, what's next? ok, sunny pal and all.. city lights smiling yellow sprinkling bulbs on talking flowers wondering if it's traffic wowo,,, your smilling yellow wakes me up! haaaaaaaaaaaa very good lines! great ! my turn  I am still half sleep!!!  |
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Post by sunny on Mar 14, 2009 6:58:39 GMT -5
[/img]
falling petals all night long
coloring the dawn
Beautiful red dreams[/center][/b] |
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Post by b4sunset on Mar 16, 2009 0:32:40 GMT -5
Whoohoo, sunny pal. your graceful haiku leaves me swooning.. and the picture too! someday , i'll learn to attach pics in my poems.... waaah, LOL! happiness to you!
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I go find a pillow image... put it in for fun ok! 
see what it looks like ok? 
not bad uh?? kind of just like your words... uh? what do you think? if you don't like it, just take it off ok.. I feel it its very match and fun! 
I am still half sleep!!! 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
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