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Post by sunny on Mar 16, 2009 6:08:14 GMT -5
Whoohoo, sunny pal. your graceful haiku leaves me swooning.. and the picture too! someday , i'll learn to attach pics in my poems.... waaah, LOL! happiness to you! heyyy b4 pal! thanks for your comment! don't worry about the attachment of your pic ok...  if I get inspiration and see your poem might be better with pic, I will go find one and attach for you ok, so you don't need to worry about it ok. sometimes you know b4, because of the art of your words.. I did think over your poems as I  them long or short.. to find the need in my head that see if you need a pic, but often, your words are so vividly shows a beautiful pic before our eyes as the glancing through your words... and for that, pic will be redone dune, overdone,, and also will take away the beauties of your words... and often I find your poem is just so beautiful as itself as words form... and much more powerful as image does to our eyes! ok! my Pal!  unlike I, I have not enough vocabularies to enrich my words of poem... so I go lazy sometimes... and need pic to help me to carry out the words that I need to say.... haaaaaaaaaaaa... of course.. sometimes,,, it does go deeper saying for the words too. only that I have to  rely on pic, but you don't! :Phaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you have a magic hand and pen my Pal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  |
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Post by immusie on Mar 27, 2009 15:10:19 GMT -5
Okay , here's one sunny pal and all: cold morning brushes
my hands on flowers cushioned
by promises of dawnhey b4 Pal! I really like your poem a lot! I go find a pillow image... put it in for fun ok! see what it looks like ok? just for fun ok? b4, let's just have fun!  cold morning brushes
my hands on flowers cushioned
by promises of dawn[/color][/size] what do you think B4 Pal?  not bad uh?? kind of just like your words... uh? what do you think? if you don't like it, just take it off ok.. I feel it its very match and fun! again I like your poem a lot! it creates a very warm morning feeling out of your word of 'cold', and specially the cushions... it makes me want to sleep longer and don't want to get up! [/quote] VERY nice one Sunny...I really liked this one from your pen....  |
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Post by sunny on Mar 27, 2009 20:57:22 GMT -5
[/color][/size] what do you think B4 Pal? not bad uh?? kind of just like your words... uh? what do you think? if you don't like it, just take it off ok.. I feel it its very match and fun! again I like your poem a lot! it creates a very warm morning feeling out of your word of 'cold', and specially the cushions... it makes me want to sleep longer and don't want to get up! [/quote] VERY nice one Sunny...I really liked this one from your pen.... [/quote] MUSIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this lovely poem is pened by B4,,,, our B4!!!! and I like her words so much I go find a image of pillow to put together with her poem!
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
do you drink tonight? :Dhaaaaaaaaaaaa
have you? :Dhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I couldn't stop my laughing musie!!!
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
but thank you! haaaaa
you make my night musie! |
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Post by b4sunset on May 3, 2009 3:36:34 GMT -5
Ok, musie dear--- this was written by me, designed by sunny pal.. you so cutey!!  |
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Post by icee on Jun 7, 2010 6:42:43 GMT -5
wow, every did great!
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if I get inspiration and see your poem might be better with pic, I will go find one and attach for you ok, so you don't need to worry about it ok. sometimes you know b4, because of the art of your words.. I did think over your poems as I 
them long or short.. to find the need in my head that see if you need a pic, but often, your words are so vividly shows a beautiful pic before our eyes as the glancing through your words... and for that, pic will be redone dune, overdone,, and also will take away the beauties of your words... and often I find your poem is just so beautiful as itself as words form... and much more powerful as image does to our eyes! ok! my Pal! 
rely on pic, but you don't! :Phaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you have a magic hand and pen my Pal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
not bad uh?? kind of just like your words... uh? what do you think? if you don't like it, just take it off ok.. I feel it its very match and fun! 
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all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
