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Post by sunny on Feb 25, 2009 0:09:43 GMT -5
Hey Cyndi,
I love these! I write them on occasion, I think they are fun to write. Here is one I wrote today:
Old Man on Balcony
robin tries to fly with broken wing
heavy raindrops descend from sky
old man sits on balcony
petting calico cat
postman passes by
there’s no mail yet
again for
the old
man [/size] [/quote] well-done Lisa  great first two lines and ending... a fine effort sunny, cyndi and sierra [/quote] thanks rico!! |
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Post by sunny on Feb 25, 2009 0:10:31 GMT -5
excellent write Lisa! good one Cyndi!! aww that is so nice of you to spend time with your elderly neighbor:) great job Sierra, very good for your first one! nice write, sunny!! Joan, I hope you will try it, I think i will too!! Thanks Cherrie! |
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Post by b4sunset on Feb 25, 2009 6:03:22 GMT -5
I'll get by with this, cyn.. thanks for thread..Dear Everyone, your pieces were all smashin'!
red light stinging crowded paradise
on lowlands kissing noon's delight
august day beams on creatures
bearing petals on palms
what a bubbly dance
a twirling feast
all creatures
chuckling
wine
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Post by sunny on Feb 25, 2009 8:20:37 GMT -5
I'll get by with this, cyn.. thanks for thread..Dear Everyone, your pieces were all smashin'!  red light stinging crowded butterflies
on pastures kissing noon's delight
august day beams on creatures
bearing petals on arms
what a bubbly dance
a twirling feast
everyone
drinking
wine
[/color][/size] [/center]  hey b4 Pal!!! this image is so nice from the words! I want that wine!!! haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..... and watch the butterflies!!! wowo it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo increadible beautiful!!! b4, you make me wake up now!!!! I need to wake to go work!!! your beautiful words wake me up and I counld hold myself to have rush to find a image for you could I please b4?  !!! you excite me! you burn me so high now I need to jump to find that image ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! b4, if you don't like the pic just take it off ok... I just want to have this moment of fun and joy ok! and I have now!!! very very happy!!! thanks for sharing b4! and many hugs! good work! |
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Post by Lola on Feb 25, 2009 8:30:06 GMT -5
Hey Cyndi,
I love these! I write them on occasion, I think they are fun to write. Here is one I wrote today:
Old Man on Balcony
robin tries to fly with broken wing
heavy raindrops descend from sky
old man sits on balcony
petting calico cat
postman passes by
there’s no mail yet
again for
the old
man [/size] [/quote] Lisa, this is an excellent nonet, hope you will post more
great poems everyone  |
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Post by Cyndi on Feb 25, 2009 8:43:54 GMT -5
thanks for all the great poems!!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 25, 2009 15:33:28 GMT -5
Hey Cyndi,
I love these! I write them on occasion, I think they are fun to write. Here is one I wrote today:
Old Man on Balcony
robin tries to fly with broken wing
heavy raindrops descend from sky
old man sits on balcony
petting calico cat
postman passes by
there’s no mail yet
again for
the old
man [/size] [/quote] Lisa, this is an excellent nonet, hope you will post more
great poems everyone [/quote]  so much Lola. I may post a few more  |
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Post by Joan on Feb 26, 2009 4:27:31 GMT -5
looking forward to more post from you Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 26, 2009 14:24:35 GMT -5
okay Lola and Joan, here is one of my older ones, I chaged a few lines:
DARKNESS FALLS
darkness falls heavily over calm
city as I walk vacant miles
praying I will find something
to put in my pocket
instead of a few
dollars and a
handful of
rusted
dust
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Post by Sierra on Feb 26, 2009 14:39:33 GMT -5
great nonet Lisa, I remember this in it's original form and I like the changes! thanks for psoting!!
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Post by sunny on Feb 26, 2009 22:47:17 GMT -5
okay Lola and Joan, here is one of my older ones, I chaged a few lines: DARKNESS FALLS
darkness falls heavily over calm
city as I walk vacant miles
praying I will find something
to put in my pocket
instead of a few
dollars and a
handful of
rusted
dustit is a very nice poem with so much fun!!! |
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Post by Dana on Feb 27, 2009 5:27:13 GMT -5
okay Lola and Joan, here is one of my older ones, I chaged a few lines: DARKNESS FALLS
darkness falls heavily over calm
city as I walk vacant miles
praying I will find something
to put in my pocket
instead of a few
dollars and a
handful of
rusted
dustvery well done, in these tough economic times this is so fitting |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 27, 2009 6:50:36 GMT -5
thanks so much sunny and dana!!
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Post by Lola on Feb 27, 2009 8:20:27 GMT -5
okay Lola and Joan, here is one of my older ones, I chaged a few lines: DARKNESS FALLS
darkness falls heavily over calm
city as I walk vacant miles
praying I will find something
to put in my pocket
instead of a few
dollars and a
handful of
rusted
dustthanks, Lisa  I love it take care |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 27, 2009 8:37:22 GMT -5
thanks Lola!!
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!!! you excite me! you burn me so high now I need to jump to find that image ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so much Lola. I may post a few more 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
