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Post by Sierra on Feb 27, 2009 15:45:32 GMT -5
okay Lola and Joan, here is one of my older ones, I chaged a few lines: DARKNESS FALLS
darkness falls heavily over calm
city as I walk vacant miles
praying I will find something
to put in my pocket
instead of a few
dollars and a
handful of
rusted
dustI love your nonet poetry Lisa, thanks so much for sharing them, have great weekend  |
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Post by bridge on Feb 28, 2009 3:42:29 GMT -5
okay Lola and Joan, here is one of my older ones, I chaged a few lines: DARKNESS FALLS
darkness falls heavily over calm
city as I walk vacant miles
praying I will find something
to put in my pocket
instead of a few
dollars and a
handful of
rusted
dustwell said, Lisa  it is sad that many of us seem to have less and less money these days  |
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Post by sunny on Feb 28, 2009 8:12:35 GMT -5
 a big pile of snow slowly melt away it has company me nights days when many hevay snow fall it greets my footsteps late sparkles on my path sighs with snow flakes softly says till next date |
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Post by immusie on Mar 1, 2009 16:17:10 GMT -5
Mountain tops capped in their snowy skirts
yawning wide beauty from afar
cresting the sun at its dusk
rest begins in shadows
waxing valley low
life slows to rest
wonders sleep
for a
day |
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Post by sunny on Mar 1, 2009 22:59:59 GMT -5
wowo! musie!! :(your poem is so impressive!! :(wowo! I love it from head to tose!!! :(WOWOWOW! i LOVE IT,  AND YOU GOT ME SO EXCITED MUSIE!!! WOWOWOW!  i LOVE IT, AND YOU GOT ME SO EXCITED MUSIE!!! WOWOWOW! :-Xi LOVE IT, AND YOU GOT ME SO EXCITED MUSIE!!! WOWOWOW! i LOVE IT, AND YOU GOT ME SO EXCITED MUSIE!!! WOWOWOW! i LOVE IT, :-[AND YOU GOT ME SO EXCITED MUSIE!!! AND I also love the image!!! it goes so well with the poem!!! wowo!! I want to write one just like yours!! musie, now you got me so excited and I go find a image and go write one too ok.... wowow wowowo wowowo! musie!!! you are so wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!poet! |
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Post by sunny on Mar 1, 2009 23:44:24 GMT -5
 You release a rosy golden breath
Slowly drift to horizon rest
Close down mascaras of clouds
Tile a grey bushes frown
Your open arms wide
Passionately
Embrace
Boat and
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Post by cdlight on Mar 2, 2009 14:25:46 GMT -5
Baghdad's Beauty: The Wonder (Nonet)
The tour today traveling the air
Helicopters in hovered pairs
Evading Enemy eyes
While whirling blades slice skies
On night lighted scenes
Nearing serene
Deep darkness
Expressed
Right
I tried to make a rhyming, acrostic, nonent...here's the result...I wish I took a picture while I was up there, but we can't post those here anyway...
CD
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Post by immusie on Mar 2, 2009 14:48:38 GMT -5
Quite impressive Cd.....you are right both a nonnet and an acrostice interesting work..good work...and you know you can always post and image..even if your not able to post your own....I mean that it's not allowed..do you want me to find one for you that may fit? musie
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Post by Sierra on Aug 21, 2009 18:55:10 GMT -5
great nonets sunny and cdlight!
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Post by icee on Jun 7, 2010 6:40:03 GMT -5
great nonet poems people!
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Post by b4sunset on Jun 9, 2010 16:38:45 GMT -5
Fantastic, you all! i'll share mine real soon..
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AND YOU GOT ME SO EXCITED MUSIE!!! 
i LOVE IT, AND YOU GOT ME SO EXCITED MUSIE!!!
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
