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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 5:26:33 GMT -5
Post by icee on Apr 9, 2010 5:26:33 GMT -5
a fine write that captivates the reader...these lines speak to me:
"angry winds
rustle
oak tree
leaves
foot heels
echo
on damp
asphalt"
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 5:33:11 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 9, 2010 5:33:11 GMT -5
thanks dear icee!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 5:41:11 GMT -5
Post by percy on Apr 9, 2010 5:41:11 GMT -5
yet another fantastic and engaging write by you dear Lisa!
I hope your muse continues to shine!
have a great day and weekend!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 5:53:10 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 9, 2010 5:53:10 GMT -5
thanks percy!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 6:05:09 GMT -5
Post by bridge on Apr 9, 2010 6:05:09 GMT -5
great ending and a fine write!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 6:51:32 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 9, 2010 6:51:32 GMT -5
many thanks Dan!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 6:56:27 GMT -5
Post by sunny on Apr 9, 2010 6:56:27 GMT -5
I also like it very much too! it is short, simple but with great depth!
very enjoy it! like these few lines:
angry winds
rustle
oak tree
leaves
foot heels
echo
on damp
asphalt
your imagination is very good through out the whole poem!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 7:12:17 GMT -5
Post by Lola on Apr 9, 2010 7:12:17 GMT -5
excellent poem, holds the reader's attention til the last word, you are a fantastic poet!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 7:18:17 GMT -5
Post by ken on Apr 9, 2010 7:18:17 GMT -5
I love the entire poem, your poetry is great!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 7:29:24 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 9, 2010 7:29:24 GMT -5
I also like it very much too! it is short, simple but with great depth! very enjoy it! like these few lines: angry winds rustle oak tree leaves foot heels echo on damp asphalt your imagination is very good through out the whole poem! Hello Sunny   so much for your kind thoughts about my poem  |
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 7:30:09 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 9, 2010 7:30:09 GMT -5
my deepest of thanks to you Lola and Ken!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 13:35:16 GMT -5
Post by Alicia on Apr 9, 2010 13:35:16 GMT -5
Lisa, you have written a very soild and strong write with a great sense of story, excellent!
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 13:42:31 GMT -5
Post by Tina on Apr 9, 2010 13:42:31 GMT -5
Hey Lisa, just popping in for a second. I am swamped with work. How are you? a most lovely and well-expressed and written poem, thanks for posting. Talk soon |
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 13:59:28 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 9, 2010 13:59:28 GMT -5
Lisa, you have written a very soild and strong write with a great sense of story, excellent! Hey Alicia thank you so much, your comments are much appreciated |
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RISE
Apr 9, 2010 14:01:49 GMT -5
Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 9, 2010 14:01:49 GMT -5
Hey Lisa, just popping in for a second. I am swamped with work. How are you? a most lovely and well-expressed and written poem, thanks for posting. Talk soon Hey Tina, long time no haar from you! I am doing pretty good, thanks for asking I can relate to how busy you are cause I am too. Don't work too hard for your kind comments about my poem, have a great weekend |
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so much for your kind thoughts about my poem 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
