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Post by Jay on Jan 29, 2007 18:39:16 GMT -5
strong write, very visually scribed as well, so very well executed... love your work, hope you will post more
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Post by Tina on Jan 30, 2007 6:26:59 GMT -5
I remember this in a slightly different form, I like the changes you made, they work well, solid write, Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 30, 2007 19:54:34 GMT -5
thanks Jay and Tina your kindness means much to me yeah Tina, I like the changes too ;D
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Post by Toni on Jan 31, 2007 8:09:42 GMT -5
excellent opening stanza!
soild write, love this!
hope you will post more Lisa
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 31, 2007 9:47:11 GMT -5
hey there toni i thanks so much, talk with ya soon:)
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Post by Lee on Feb 3, 2007 3:56:54 GMT -5
wonderful work, much depth in so few words, a controlled and eloquent write
I like the imagery as well
good to read you again
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Post by Joan on Feb 4, 2007 5:55:36 GMT -5
thanks so much ciara, sara, sharon and joan! all your comments mean much to me! you are so very welcome, it was a pleasure to read yuor words
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 4, 2007 16:36:39 GMT -5
thanks bunches Lee!
thanks again Joan:)
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Post by Billy on Feb 6, 2007 4:42:06 GMT -5
love this, Lisa
good imagery and an even tone
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Post by countrygalcc on Feb 7, 2007 18:45:58 GMT -5
Lisa, Happy to read your work. I would love to have a book of poetry by you. Love your soul.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 7, 2007 19:23:36 GMT -5
thanks Billy!
thanks so much Misty, I really appreciate your kind words...
I am working on that book, when it's done, I will let you know:)
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Post by samuul on Feb 7, 2007 20:25:20 GMT -5
Lisa A powerful piece, well written... Wishing you well.. Sam
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Post by b4sunset on Feb 8, 2007 19:11:08 GMT -5
Deep and insightful ... and with few lines, you captured me, lisa.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 10, 2007 9:53:30 GMT -5
thank you so much sam and b4sunset for your kind words, I really appreciate your comments
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Post by Treasure on Feb 15, 2007 18:33:35 GMT -5
thanks so much treasure, blue, brian, bernie and trina! you're welcome Lisa talk with you soon
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