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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 17, 2007 0:29:51 GMT -5
many thanks again treasure, and yes we will talk soon:)
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Post by dwlackey on Feb 18, 2007 13:10:00 GMT -5
Nice poetic words that flows good.
I like this one has nice images.
Good work!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 19, 2007 19:04:37 GMT -5
Hi Dwayne,
many thanks!
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Post by mystiq on Feb 20, 2007 0:10:23 GMT -5
Hi Lisa ... powerfully emotive write - every word, each phrase is acute! Kudos! - 5 gold stars.
Love - Mystiq x
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 21, 2007 1:26:36 GMT -5
Hi Lisa ... powerfully emotive write - every word, each phrase is acute! Kudos! - 5 gold stars. Love - Mystiq x many thanks, mystiq  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 27, 2010 2:00:50 GMT -5
hey guys,  I didnt have time to write a new poem, so I pulled this one up for today...let me know what you think  |
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Post by rico on Apr 27, 2010 2:50:41 GMT -5
a fantastic write!
love these lines:
"Broken footpaths
fail to leave a trail."
thanks for letting us read this one again!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 27, 2010 3:11:00 GMT -5
thanks Rico!
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Post by Sierra on Apr 27, 2010 3:38:53 GMT -5
Lisa, "Life Fail" has always been a favorite of mine  Your writing consoles my soul ! Keep blessing us with the essence of your soul dear Lisa |
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Post by Charles on Apr 27, 2010 3:59:20 GMT -5
great write and read, love it!
great to know it was published...nice job!
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Post by Cherrie on Apr 27, 2010 5:49:12 GMT -5
I will always love thsi piece Lisa!
I cherish this part:
"Desperate pleas
for rescue
fall hushed against
velocity’s devastation."
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Post by Alicia on Apr 27, 2010 6:06:34 GMT -5
wonderfully penned, loved  it all over again, thanks! |
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Post by bridge on Apr 27, 2010 6:48:30 GMT -5
I feel privileged to read this, thanks I am so glad this one was published because it's great  |
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Post by ciara on Apr 27, 2010 8:10:50 GMT -5
love this poem Lisa!
the opening stanza stands out for me:
"At the soles
of bloodied feet,
lies remnants
of an ill-fated life."
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Post by mark on Apr 27, 2010 9:14:43 GMT -5
I am so in love with this write, great job 
it so wonderful that your lovely poem published 2007 ;D
Lisa, you are lighting it up again today 
thanks for the great read
have a blessed day everyone
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it all over again, thanks!
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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