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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 3:46:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 3:46:41 GMT -5 Jan 21, 2012 10:14:25 GMT -5 ciara said: strong write Lisa, I love it! thanks for posting and have a great weekend! ;D so much dear Ciara
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 3:57:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 3:57:39 GMT -5 Jan 21, 2012 10:56:57 GMT -5 Eddie said: wonderful job Lisa, thanks for sharing:) many thanks Eddie
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 3:58:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 3:58:42 GMT -5 Jan 21, 2012 11:08:49 GMT -5 Lily said: I love it too, great pace and tone! fantastic ending! have a wonderful weekend Lisa! thanks Lily
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 4:00:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 4:00:07 GMT -5 Jan 21, 2012 11:09:19 GMT -5 Dana said: great style, depth and tone, soild all aroud write as always Lisa I like it more today than when I first read it ENJOY your weekend thanks so mch dear Dana
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Sharon Assistant Administrator[/size] Believe and Achieve Posts: 2,430	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 7:22:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sharon on Jan 22, 2012 7:22:21 GMT -5 I remember this one Lisa, I loved it again today! have a beautiful Sunday!
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 16:12:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 16:12:49 GMT -5 Jan 21, 2012 18:24:09 GMT -5 Silent-One said: fantastic write Lisa, it has always been a favoirite of mine, keep up the great work and have a wonderful weekend! thanks Harry
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 16:15:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 16:15:22 GMT -5 Jan 22, 2012 1:22:27 GMT -5 rico said: a fine poem, Lisa, thanks for posting and have a great weekend! thanks so much Rico
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 16:16:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 16:16:59 GMT -5 Jan 22, 2012 2:10:22 GMT -5 Billy said: great write Lisa, thanks! ;D Billy
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 16:19:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 16:19:56 GMT -5 Jan 22, 2012 7:22:21 GMT -5 Sharon said: I remember this one Lisa, I loved it again today! have a beautiful Sunday! thanks Sharon I am having beautiful day :-/it is a gorgeous day here, sunny and clear and not too cold love ya
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Treasure Echoes Senior Member Friend of Echoes Lorraine Hansberry Posts: 496	OTHER SIDE Jan 22, 2012 18:01:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Treasure on Jan 22, 2012 18:01:33 GMT -5 Hey Lisa I love it

Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	OTHER SIDE Jan 23, 2012 14:39:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 23, 2012 14:39:22 GMT -5 thanks Donna!
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Brian Echoes Family Member LonePoet Friend of Echoes Searching for my mind Posts: 1,140	OTHER SIDE Jan 23, 2012 19:56:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Jan 23, 2012 19:56:41 GMT -5 great suspense until the end, love it! so happy to see it getting so many reads! have a great night!
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Charles Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes It's me "blue" Posts: 605	OTHER SIDE Jan 23, 2012 20:23:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Charles on Jan 23, 2012 20:23:50 GMT -5 love it Lisa, have a great evening!

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Post by Carin on Jan 23, 2012 22:38:20 GMT -5

Hi Lisa, I love the entire poem, but these parts stand out for me:

"I twist and try to run
but fall deeper
into its greedy pits
and sink into the belly
of its entrapment.

Its hands are cold
and thieving. Desiring
to possess the whole
of who I am as it craves
all I have ever been.

It scratches and claws
trying to pull me down
to where it can steal
my precious life.

I am almost smothering.
I struggle and resist
praying I can remember
how to turn the key
to set my soul free."

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