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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 19, 2018 8:43:43 GMT -5
Faith Walks Thin
faith
walks thin
rage whispers
within broken
soul
cap
held out
in hand, he
hums familiar
tune
prays
he makes
enough so
his hunger is
fed
street
hustler
begs frail dimes;
survival of
life
closed
mouths fade
unheard in
this dark and vile
place
©2018 Lisa Arnold
***another new poem for my collection 
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Post by Sierra on Jul 19, 2018 9:31:43 GMT -5
great work sign0173
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Post by Jack on Jul 19, 2018 9:43:44 GMT -5
well-crafted anim_32
 for sharing
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Post by Lola on Jul 19, 2018 12:47:25 GMT -5
love the theme and imagery...good work anim_32
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Post by Joan on Jul 19, 2018 13:01:44 GMT -5
it is hard to keep faith when you are living in poverty...well-done sis 
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Post by Reggie on Jul 19, 2018 13:26:56 GMT -5
like this write much it tells a full story in a confined form...great work anim_32
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Post by Bob on Jul 19, 2018 14:09:33 GMT -5
Lisa, you paint a complete story so few words...nicely written 
thanks for the great 
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Post by Betty on Jul 19, 2018 14:50:25 GMT -5
wow, this is a quietly powerful write
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Post by rico on Jul 19, 2018 15:06:57 GMT -5
sign0175 you are writing some great new poetry, can't wait to more!
your new collection is going to be fire
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 19, 2018 16:36:23 GMT -5
everyone!
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Post by Toni on Jul 19, 2018 17:32:03 GMT -5
love this, great job
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Post by Carin on Jul 19, 2018 18:04:48 GMT -5
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Post by Sharon on Jul 19, 2018 18:14:57 GMT -5
like this much 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 19, 2018 18:40:21 GMT -5
love this, great job |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 19, 2018 18:40:57 GMT -5
Carin
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for sharing
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
