|
Post by Rose on Jul 20, 2018 16:29:35 GMT -5
sign0175 i really like this
|
|
|
Post by Toni on Jul 20, 2018 17:50:44 GMT -5
like the revisions you've made
|
|
|
Post by Jay on Jul 20, 2018 19:45:54 GMT -5
great chain poetry
|
|
|
Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 21, 2018 6:35:35 GMT -5
thanks Tami, Joy, Cheerie, Rose, Toni and Jay
|
|
|
Post by Tina on Jul 21, 2018 11:40:14 GMT -5
Faith Walks Thin
faith walks thin rage whispers within broken soul
cap held out in hand, he hums familiar tune
prays he makes enough so his hunger is fed
street hustler begs frail dimes; survival of life
closed mouths fade unheard in this dark and vile place
©2018 Lisa Arnold
***another new poem for my collection
love the whole damn thang
|
|
|
Post by Jack on Jul 21, 2018 12:27:30 GMT -5
I like the changes you made on this
|
|
|
Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 21, 2018 16:21:32 GMT -5
|
|
|
Post by Joy on Jul 21, 2018 19:46:24 GMT -5
thanks Tami, Joy, Cheerie, Rose, Toni and Jay
|
|
|
Post by trina on Jul 22, 2018 15:46:14 GMT -5
|
|
|
Post by Carin on Jul 23, 2018 12:34:29 GMT -5
you've made some changes since I last read it sign0173
I am gong to be absent for a few days so take care
|
|
|
Post by Dana on Jul 23, 2018 20:12:47 GMT -5
wonderfully expressed, each lanturne stands solidity on it's own and blends perfectly together to weave a story so much!
|
|
|
Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 23, 2018 21:09:40 GMT -5
you've made some changes since I last read it sign0173
I am gong to be absent for a few days so take care thank-you-smiley-animated-thankyousign so much Carin!
|
|
|
Post by Alicia on Jul 25, 2018 10:55:02 GMT -5
strong chain poem
|
|
|
Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 27, 2018 9:15:34 GMT -5
strong chain poem Alicia!
|
|
|
Post by mark on Aug 4, 2018 0:25:20 GMT -5
this is fantastic writing, Lisa
|
|