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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 19, 2018 18:41:37 GMT -5
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Post by Kristi on Jul 19, 2018 19:20:58 GMT -5
well-done
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Post by Lee on Jul 19, 2018 20:00:53 GMT -5
this is great writing
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Post by icee on Jul 19, 2018 21:38:15 GMT -5
i love chain poetry and yours is solid
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Post by trina on Jul 19, 2018 21:51:18 GMT -5
strong poem and important theme
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 19, 2018 22:51:10 GMT -5
well-done so much
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 19, 2018 22:51:55 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 19, 2018 22:53:07 GMT -5
i love chain poetry and yours is solid thank-you-smiley-animated-thankyousign icee
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 19, 2018 22:53:53 GMT -5
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Post by Sierra on Jul 20, 2018 6:53:38 GMT -5
everyone!
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Post by Dana on Jul 20, 2018 7:38:21 GMT -5
wonderfully expressed, each lanturne stands solidity on it's own and blends perfectly together to weave a story
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Post by Reggie on Jul 20, 2018 7:45:03 GMT -5
Lisa, I see you have made quite a few changes since I first read it yesterday...I like the latest version, excellent job
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Post by Sara on Jul 20, 2018 8:08:03 GMT -5
you did a great job with this here poem
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Post by Brian on Jul 20, 2018 8:45:07 GMT -5
this is hella good writing
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Post by mark on Jul 20, 2018 8:56:43 GMT -5
great sense of style, nicely penned
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