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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 10:26:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2018 10:26:02 GMT -5 Jul 20, 2018 7:38:21 GMT -5 Dana said: wonderfully expressed, each lanturne stands solidity on it's own and blends perfectly together to weave a story so much!
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 10:26:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2018 10:26:37 GMT -5 Jul 19, 2018 20:00:53 GMT -5 Lee said: this is great writing thank-you-smiley-animated-thankyousign
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 10:27:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2018 10:27:29 GMT -5 Jul 20, 2018 7:45:03 GMT -5 Reggie said: Lisa, I see you have made quite a few changes since I first read it yesterday...I like the latest version, excellent job
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 10:28:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2018 10:28:20 GMT -5 Jul 20, 2018 8:08:03 GMT -5 Sara said: you did a great job with this here poem so much!
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 10:29:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2018 10:29:15 GMT -5 Jul 20, 2018 8:45:07 GMT -5 Brian said: this is hella good writing thank-you-smiley-animated-thankyousign
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 10:29:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2018 10:29:53 GMT -5 Jul 20, 2018 8:56:43 GMT -5 mark said: great sense of style, nicely penned
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bridge Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 883	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 12:45:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bridge on Jul 20, 2018 12:45:49 GMT -5 a fine write, love the ending

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Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 12:59:45 GMT -5

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Post by Brianna on Jul 20, 2018 12:59:45 GMT -5

Lisa, you know I love the entire poem smileys-applause-242316

but the first lanturne in your brilliant chain stands out for me t0330

"faith
walks thin
rage whispers
within broken
soul"

Read more: echoes64.proboards.com/thread/16992/faith-walks-thin-lanturne-chain#ixzz5LopZisYi

Last Edit: Jul 20, 2018 13:17:10 GMT -5 by Brianna

Kristi Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 677	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 13:31:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kristi on Jul 20, 2018 13:31:14 GMT -5 like the changes you made to this great piece
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 13:43:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2018 13:43:31 GMT -5 Jul 20, 2018 12:45:49 GMT -5 bridge said: a fine write, love the ending Dan
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Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 13:44:06 GMT -5

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2018 13:44:06 GMT -5

Jul 20, 2018 12:59:45 GMT -5 Brianna said:

Lisa, you know I love the entire poem smileys-applause-242316

but the first lanturne in your brilliant chain stands out for me t0330

"faith
walks thin
rage whispers
within broken
soul"

Read more: echoes64.proboards.com/thread/16992/faith-walks-thin-lanturne-chain#ixzz5LopZisYi

thanks so much Bri :-[

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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 13:44:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 20, 2018 13:44:43 GMT -5 Jul 20, 2018 13:31:14 GMT -5 Kristi said: like the changes you made to this great piece thank-you-smiley-animated-thankyousign Kristi
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Tamika Echoes Family Member Reggie's wife Posts: 858	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 14:28:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tamika on Jul 20, 2018 14:28:28 GMT -5 excellent from start to finish
	Last Edit: Jul 20, 2018 14:28:44 GMT -5 by Tamika

Joy Echoes Family Member Posts: 510	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 15:10:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Joy on Jul 20, 2018 15:10:24 GMT -5 wonderful piece

Cherrie Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Loving This Beautiful Life Posts: 1,002	Faith Walks Thin - a lanturne chain (NEW poem) Jul 20, 2018 15:23:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Cherrie on Jul 20, 2018 15:23:23 GMT -5 i love this poem
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